Silent Melodies! Comments

On its way of seeking salvation, ------that line jumped out at me and speaks volumes to me---you have such a deep voice, a deep searching voice in your poetry... beautiful

kahaN hain vo haath jinoN ne kalateet rait ko pyaar se cHooaa hai? kohra aa paDa boonda-baandi chataakay sangeet ki lehroN ki tarah unginay taaray ho rahay hain vyapak mil jhul rahay hain saans k lemhay main

When your heart and mind remain calm you experience the divine. An inspiring poem indeed. 'Calm is my heart, Cries it not, laughs it not, On its way of seeking salvation, Thereby shaking off its stagnation.'... is a meaningful stanza. Loved it.10+++++

Silence is eloquent, blissful, and melodious. The hands of creation have made wonderful things, and the sands of time have in course of time added to its beauty. Alas, there are many who are fond of noise.

Those iprning 6 lines are the most sumptuous opening lines I have read in some time! ! Great poem! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++

Silence is golden always...it has colours..it has emotions....it can speak volumes...it is the best companion and soul mate to one especially when in sorrow mood....your poem sings truly melodies....thanks Geetha 10++++

The last stanza is superb, and apt is the title of the poem, very poetic too. Loved the melody of your poem, Geetha, it remains in the ears and heart much long after reading. 'Calm is my heart, Cries it not, laughs it not, On its way of seeking salvation, Thereby shaking off its stagnation. Dreams rings in melodies, When it flies on the wings of ecstasy! ' - Excellent!

The calm beauty of the atmosphere and the mind are captured beautifully well in your lines, Geetha! The calmness is infectious and I too experience a calm inside! A 10

Calm is my heart, Cries it not, laughs it not, On its way of seeking salvation, The silent melody calms and soothes the mind. Beautiful poem Geetha.

Waves never speak unless they touch and vibrate a screen producing sound, light is unseen but when it touches an object it shines, so are the thoughts that are always silent but when they touch a human heart, such an impressive poem is created.

timeless sands, waves sizzling, mingling breaths, wings, swininging, sufferings..... so many points in this beautiful poem. very poetic...... thank u . tony

Musical waves give amazing thrill in mind after reading this interesting verse. Beyond dimensional spring we feel the important imagery. Thoughts travel many miles and across the shore of thoughts silence adds values to feel. Wings of ecstasy allows us to feel and fly high towards a realm of reality. Heart is very calm and beat sings for God. Silence is powerful to give us eternal feelings about our eternal father, nature and this universe. A deeply philosophical poem is excellently penned...10

A beautiful poem! Last stanza is absolutely brilliant! Loved reading this fabulous piece of poetry! (10)