Sunday, August 31, 2008

Silent Leaves Comments

Rating: 3.5

when dusk embraces the radiant sun
i see flashes of green far beyond
then deafening silence covers land
broken by crickets up the palms
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Manonton Dalan
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Vampire Heart 31 August 2008

A very descriptive poem, it brings out a clear picture of what's actually happening, indeed a lovely poem.

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Hades Pandemonium 31 August 2008

Very nicely written and a good use of metaphors.: -)

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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