Tuesday, November 1, 2011

Silent- I Remain Comments

Rating: 5.0

i was approached today
by someone so kind and caring
she said, 'you have such sadness,
I see it in your eyes, is everything ok? '
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Silentpoet Grl
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B. M. Atsen 04 November 2011

Silent i remain, speachless and mute... It's... wow. My heart beats for more of such inspiring lines. You'r great!

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Ency Bearis 04 November 2011

Well expressed introspections, great piece.

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Jacqui Broad 03 November 2011

My heart screamed please don't let this be a true story! It caused me sadness, because this happen everyday, everywhere. And the silent victims just say I'm fine and carry on..hoping for the best. Heart-chokingly sad..

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Dean Meredith 03 November 2011

Now that's a great poem!

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Cosmic Dreamer 02 November 2011

Wow! ... Man's inhumanity to man brought to life on the page... A powerful poem... Very well written... Peace and love to you Silentpoet Girl...

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