She will stand out and smile,
on my acheivements,
but she wont show how proud she feels,
at those moments.
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This is so true in some cultures where emotions are not articulated but are felt. This reminds me of my mother. a 10
oh tht is the true love epitomized deep on skin of soul, wrought ingenious by luscious flow, well done.....
WOW! ! ! .......This is the power of love.........It is full of emotion......and this is true....very nice poem.......I loved it a looooooooooot....keeeeeeeeeeep writing :) ....
great poem! ! good, deep and creative...i give you a 10+