Saturday, October 26, 2019

Silent Epiphanies Comments

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Small epiphanies at the silent heart of things:
The soothing light of the Word in the verdant garden;
Calming colours in the warm domain of dreaming.
These items extinguish the dark realms of sadness.
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Scott Hastie 24 April 2020

I found this to be a strong poem - each line carefully measured to deliver their own impact and yet cling on tight to the structure of your poem. This combination of which made it a real treat to read. A mature piece, for sure. Each line well crafted with key words, carefully chosen to deliver their own impact. To finish with 'dwindle' I found especially pleasing.

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Dominic Windram 25 April 2020

Thanks Scott for your kind and perceptive comments.

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