Silent Epiphanies Poem by DM W

Silent Epiphanies



Small epiphanies at the silent heart of things:
The soothing light of the Word in the verdant garden;
Calming colours in the warm domain of dreaming.
These items extinguish the dark realms of sadness.

Essential oils soften the pain of existence.
Love's indescribable magic is rekindled.
Beauty's splendid roses dazzle the senses.
The sweet flowers of longing will never dwindle.

Saturday, October 26, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: calm
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scott Hastie 24 April 2020

I found this to be a strong poem - each line carefully measured to deliver their own impact and yet cling on tight to the structure of your poem. This combination of which made it a real treat to read. A mature piece, for sure. Each line well crafted with key words, carefully chosen to deliver their own impact. To finish with 'dwindle' I found especially pleasing.

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Dominic Windram 25 April 2020

Thanks Scott for your kind and perceptive comments.

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