Monday, November 21, 2016

Silent Crow Comments

Rating: 5.0

The crow has reconciled to its fate
Stopped flapping its wings
Sitting on the window sill
The silence in the meadow is eerie
...
Read full text

Anil Kumar Panda
COMMENTS
Akhtar Jawad 21 December 2016

Reconciliation in love is difficult but ground realities of life force us to reconcile in love even. It's a beautiful poem.

0 0 Reply
Anil Kumar Panda 22 December 2016

You are right Sir. Thanks for reading and comment. Regards.

0 0
Seamus O Brian 21 December 2016

Powerful imagery here, Tiku. I love the visual of the air still as in meditation. Also the scent of night oozing from the black body of the crow is so inventive and vivid. Of course, the unexpected finale is satisfying and yet causes deeper contemplation. Bravo!

0 0 Reply
Anil Kumar Panda 22 December 2016

Honored. Thanks very much Sir for giving time to my poem and wonderful comment. My regards.

0 0
Close
Error Success