Wednesday, December 17, 2008

Silent Confession Comments

Rating: 2.9

The hands that write what lips would dare not say
and eyes that mock what mind would dare to play
of nights lost in the deepest thoughts of him
that dares to say the holiest name of names.
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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring
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Dr Antony Theodore 27 April 2020

Yet in his chamber near to mine... I hear what ears would dare not hear - those sounds which canst my conscience bear for sins flown by the air.. experiences of life written so well. mystery and secrets of life. very fine poem. tony

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Blue Eyes 27 December 2008

i love the rhime and i love the poem in general its like a deep meaningful song.

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Kesav Easwaran 18 December 2008

a write softly touching the reader mind...your 'silent' confession is talking sincere, loud and clear, Jane..the opening lines, i liked most...truthful words...10

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Seema Chowdhury 18 December 2008

very nice expressions expressed in your poem. take care.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 December 2008

Your silence is golden! ! Great writes Jane.

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