Friday, January 9, 2009

Silent Confession...........(My Bag Of Sins.....) ...... Comments

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Was walking, with silent thoughts in my mind
am sure we both gonna have a hot talk again
for all the questions He gonna fire at me
am going to stand without answers for sure
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Sebastine Humaemo
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Winnie Angel 06 April 2009

...nice thought..frank...every individual must have felt the same way as you do.....i can relate to this....evil is always colorful and attarctive....but good will win in the end..u try and confess its simply beautiful! ! ...

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Tess Macapagal 18 February 2009

iam imagining this poet me and m dad..., . hu huh, , my eyes falls of tears... learnt to look back with my past sin to dad... love my dad tine...was happy to be your friend you open my eyes to read this bag of sins... wont forget you... its not late to show my love to my dad tine. like this poem much, well done lol!

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Malini Kadir 17 January 2009

heart felt and beautiful.....

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Nia Riz 16 January 2009

hehe...nice poem...specially the last paragraph...

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Vidi Writes 11 January 2009

The knowledge of the Devil Trap Placed right on top as a Cap. Under this enlightened shelter You are ever a Winner. Wonderful subject... Heartfelt thanks to you.

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Miriam Maia Padua 10 January 2009

wow...i was touched your words...you're such a very wonderful person with heart full of humility..full of faith...i cant explain my feelings reading your poem...this is so extra ordinary...i feel my eyes moist....(i was fascinated by the feeling poured on this..i'm happy you know Mother May and the sacrifice and pain Jesus have experienced.... by this piece i remember my dreams, when i was 16, with Mother Mary and Her son Jesus...this piece makes my inspiration to put it into poetry..... thanks for sharing Sebastine...I'm really happy for you.......keep on writing...10+++++++++++++

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Naidz Ladia 09 January 2009

by just reading ths poem, i think u came from a seminary, , , or a student of theology..ths s a story characterzed by 6 personalities, , different characters in one setting...BAG OF SINS? r u really sure not tons of sin? sinners r rampant in thz wrld, gud for u coz u realzd early, if not u became the top 1blacklisted of st.peters lists... well, calm down...every confession done with honest-true hearts r accepted n heaven.i think, at least there s contentment now n urself...nd ur already comfrtable after the confession..one thing u shud not frget, donlet urself fall in the charm of devil..let ur heart be full of godly feelings..donlook at devils beauty, mght u fall again to him or...her? uhum.... ths piece of urs s very beautiful...nice to read...easy to understand nd i like ths, promise.. thanks for sharing..

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