Sunday, January 20, 2008

Silent Bystander Comments

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I'm a girl sitting in the corner, a big, dark, shaded spot
silently looking on while her friend is getting shot.

A boy watching on while his mother's getting beat
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Sara Amidon
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This is a great poem and its great that you are not a silent bystander anymore. well done

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i loved this sooo much! ! i know how yu feel, but im not the silent bystander lol...Kaila ox.

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Meggie Gultiano 23 January 2008

Sara, you have the making of a great poet in the future..I will stand by my word.. Now, keep on writing..you have that many questions inside you to have it expose in the open..I know, i was like you before in my younger days.. this is a wonderful write, again, Sara

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Anita Blake 22 January 2008

great write. really like

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Chris Bignell 20 January 2008

well written :) keep writing.

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