Now I am silent,
Because I think,
I am all spent.
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Oh how inspiring. My Fiance might like this poem. It reminds me of Wicca in a way.
Dear Sky Welch, I hope your fiance will find some time to read this poem and leave a comment, as you did. Thank you for the comment.
Yes it's better to remain silent in the undone situation. But definitely those weird clowns can not remain long.... nice penning You may read my poem Killing myself.
I enjoy the imagery captured in the brevity of your words, particularly in this poem. I don't pretend to understand all the references in your imagery, but they lead one inevitably a heartbeat at a time into your final image.
Thanks for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts here, @Carol Fleming Klein. Much obliged.
@Valsa George, Thanks for your thoughtful comment on my poem.
Silence echoes in the heart..a beautiful narration of your thoughts explained very clearly... Now I am silent, because I think I am all spent, it says all. You are a great writer of poetry.. Keep it up..best wishes.
Your kind appraisal has inspired me a lot, @Shama T.Bukhari. Such inspiring words encourage poets to write better poems as days go by. Thank you very much, dear poet.
Thank you, @Lasoaphia Quxazs, for reading the poem and sharing your thought. Much obliged.
Silence clears the mind, it excites realization that life is never perfect so do whatever it needs to survive!
'Silence clears the mind' - a nice thought that made me think over. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on my poem, dear poet @Marvin Brato.
recent act your nation created such a silence you broke the silence putting a candle....beautiful brother 10
Good flow of language and the scarcity of words which makes the poetic piece very arresting.
Thank you very much for your inspiring comment, @Elizabeth Padillo Olesen. I am much obliged!
Under certain situations, we fall silent.... the silence of the grave which is so suffocating! A poignant write with alliterative rhyming!
@Amitava Sur, Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving your kind thoughts here. I agree to your remarks. Certainly I shall read your poem too.