I can't make heads or tails of your grammar. Might some punctuation help? Or proofreading what you've written before hitting the submit button. Or maybe that incomprehensibility is a Trumpian conceit? Really, it's just hard to know °exactly° what you're trying to say here. I get the gist, but poetry needs a higher standard than that.
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I can't make heads or tails of your grammar. Might some punctuation help? Or proofreading what you've written before hitting the submit button. Or maybe that incomprehensibility is a Trumpian conceit? Really, it's just hard to know °exactly° what you're trying to say here. I get the gist, but poetry needs a higher standard than that.
not a poem just an opinion
not a poem but an opinion
If it's only an opinion, and not a poem (and only barely comprehensible writing) , please save it to put on your home poets page. This is noise.