Saturday, January 14, 2017

Silencing Opinion Comments

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Silencing opinion

On france24 a TV Channel a red haired lady an enemy of a man
that is not yet a president of the USA, said something strange:
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Jan Oskar Hansen
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Lantz Pierre 14 January 2017

I can't make heads or tails of your grammar. Might some punctuation help? Or proofreading what you've written before hitting the submit button. Or maybe that incomprehensibility is a Trumpian conceit? Really, it's just hard to know °exactly° what you're trying to say here. I get the gist, but poetry needs a higher standard than that.

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Jan Oskar Hansen 14 January 2017

not a poem just an opinion

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Jan Oskar Hansen 14 January 2017

not a poem but an opinion

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Lantz Pierre 14 January 2017

If it's only an opinion, and not a poem (and only barely comprehensible writing) , please save it to put on your home poets page. This is noise.

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