Silences Comments

The poem holds a wonderful bouquet of images which are more than interpreting the feelings of a man in a chaotic world. They also seem to tone down the impact with 'the silence of the hills.... song of a bird.... (and) trees with a heartbeat'. Thanks for sharing an awesome piece of writing.

A marvel of a poem! Its images and metaphors transmit feelings so deep and sadly felt but that so easily touch our central core. You have masterfully painted and gifted us with your feelings in a most delicate, poetic and unusual way in this very rich and gorgeous composition of which there is so much more to say. When I got to the end, I embraced your poem and also cried....