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And not I think you're going to be a great poet one day.You are right now and you are the greatest the world has ever produced! I salute you.I take my hat off to you.

Ok i just love reading your work. I flow though as i read. I love it how do you do it lol.

this is really sad....but good write.....i really criered when i read this

Your words haunt the night As you grow in your fright You are indeed strong Although you always long For the freedom of innocence That was taken in insolence For you, my heart doth ache As, I wish you could make For yourself an inner peace, As his hold does decrease. Blessings to heal your soul, Love aimed to console The pain and anguish As in his crime you languish Amazing woman that you are As I send blessings from afar. My soul is with you...smiles n blessings.

this poem is amazing.. I love the way you wrote it and how it sounds.. it's something I can relate to and I want to invite you to.read my poem: goodbye.. hope to hear from you and keep writing!

A strong poem. I can relate to the writing.

Glass tears etching pain sends chills down my spine. This one is amazingly good SPG.: D

'glass tears etching pain...', stunning image. very deep in the core of the heart. well done!

Great poem. I will read more of your work after this. Lot's of torment, but written nicely. You are a talented writer. Nice work.

Ah! ! So sad but written beautifully. You have such a talent of description, laced with great emotion. My heart goes out to you, my dear friend. I know the feeling, it's horrific. Hearts like yours are so great they can be hurt so deeply that it feels just the way you wrote. Remember this, your heart is great and because of that you are great. You are brave to share this. Your heart is your strength if truly loved. Use your great heart to love yourself everything else will fall into place. Thank you so much for sharing. :) [3 [3 [3 [3

Pain is but a memory... Wether we choose to relive it is entirely up to us... However, pain usually leaves a deeper scar than joy in our memory of life... Very well written piece...

A sad but powerful poem. A fantastic write.

great poem. sad, touching and has a lot of felling.

blood 'decends' on pieces left to lay, sounds better plus it rhymes with Mend in the previous sentence. What do you think? ? ?

great poem. sad, touching and has a lot of felling.

Great poem friend, things will get better, nothing ever stays the same...big up!

Your poem portrays a world of pain! ! ! strong writing! ! !

Sad but i liked the poems flow and content. Appears you have another winner.L.