In wintery nights dark and deep
In the ebb when it walks on the beach
Longs for a listener in love’s breach
Silence In tears shed on a grave
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You are the born poet, who can see the beauty in everything.
Silence yearns to speak. Beautiful imagery. Thank you.
''sighs '' used twice that can mar the quality of the poem, otherwise you have done a great job rather i say it is an excellent work when you personified the entity '' silence ''
Gorgeous flow, sprightly and generous like a gurgling mountain stream…crystal clear in appeal like beaten silver gushes out along a stream in a freshening hum, to far off village and clime... Fluid, easy on the tongue … great poetry artful skillful and captivating. The effortlessness is charming and absorbing. Liked a lot Blessings