Tuesday, July 23, 2013

Silence Yearns To Speak Comments

Rating: 5.0

In wintery nights dark and deep
In the ebb when it walks on the beach
Longs for a listener in love’s breach
Silence In tears shed on a grave
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Yasmin Khan
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Saadat Tahir 05 August 2013

Gorgeous flow, sprightly and generous like a gurgling mountain stream…crystal clear in appeal like beaten silver gushes out along a stream in a freshening hum, to far off village and clime... Fluid, easy on the tongue … great poetry artful skillful and captivating. The effortlessness is charming and absorbing. Liked a lot Blessings

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 28 July 2013

You are the born poet, who can see the beauty in everything.

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David Wood 26 July 2013

silence can be wonderful at times. A good write.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 July 2013

Silence yearns to speak. Beautiful imagery. Thank you.

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Wahab Abdul 24 July 2013

''sighs '' used twice that can mar the quality of the poem, otherwise you have done a great job rather i say it is an excellent work when you personified the entity '' silence ''

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Gajanan Mishra 23 July 2013

silence in tears shed on a grave, good write really,

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