My silence has rendered me dumb
In your eyes, my unending kindness
Gullible to your perception
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I agree with you, rage if not vent out burns our inner self. I liked your poem...Thanks for sharing
Your poem expresses your emotional trap; various solutions bump into each other or the timing is off. But you now have your freedom and you can declare it loud and clear in a poem. That's a Big Benefit bcause the poem records this state being free. You can use it like a marker: from this point on I am a woman who freed herself by herself.