Friday, June 2, 2017

Silence Please! Comments

Rating: 4.8

I don't protest I do not complain
On a bicycle with severe knee pain!
I withdraw my motorbike's indent
Please don't make me silent
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Akhtar Jawad
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Hazel Durham 05 June 2017

The strength of perseverance and the ability to look at the positive side of everything is truly a gift of courage and wisdom, two qualities that are a force to be reckoned with! Great write!

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Valsa George 03 June 2017

His indomitable spirit cannot be defeated..... or silenced! Bravo!

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 June 2017

A good inspiring image with a real image. Thanks

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Rajnish Manga 02 June 2017

Wonderful limerick poem drawing a very funny situation when m/bike is out of order and bicycle comes handy. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks.

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