Silence Or Noise Comments

but the Time. It's making sound along my vein delivering the message profound, you listen to it or not, it will chime and push you to the end. It's Time. Neither Silence nor Noise! it is time. it takes me to the grave whether i will or not. a great realization put down clearly in words. thank you dear poetess.

aching soul, i crawl like tortoise, winning over past, present and future.. so many ideas packed well with a sort of inexpressible pain. nicely written. thank you

I caught the title of poem. Interesting. The way you place noise and silence, it is beautiful. Poem is nice. And if, i can reach some factor greater than time...

Ya Dear Power of time is matchless you said rightly Plz come and read my poems

Very thoughtful write Neela. I loved these lines the most... because, I never saw any earthly creature can win over past present, or future! Very true said. These are the powerful lines, which makes this poem interesting. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.