Monday, August 18, 2014

Silence On Gaza Comments

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Chand sahma hua nikla hay sitare chup hayn,
Woh andhera ke jahan bhar ke nazare chup hain.
Ab to badal bhi bahut door kahin per barse,
Dharti pe bahte huye khoon ke dhare chup hayn.
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Geetha Jayakumar 20 August 2014

Thoughtful write. Very true said even the justice is silenced, the nature too is silenced. Loved the way you presented it.

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Khalida Bano Ali 18 August 2014

Gaza was captured in 967 war, and the people of Gaza have all rights to fight for their independence. A great poem.

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Neela Nath Das 18 August 2014

Is there no voice which can raise a loud protest to stop that cruelty? Your poem is amazing.Loved the usage of metaphor.

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Valsa George 18 August 2014

There is a criminal silence about the whole thing while thousands suffer in silence and are being for ever silenced! Even the media that harps on every silly thing is silent! A beautiful translation and a powerful write!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 18 August 2014

One must break the silence must oppose the cruelty...love your feelings brother 10

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V P Mahur 18 August 2014

Dear bro, the pain for humanity has been expressed well and in a deep feel. Thanks for your comments on my poem.

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