Wednesday, June 21, 2006

Silence Of Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mystic beauty
endless pleasure
filled with eternity
cascade like a fall
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Fasika Ayalew
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Dr Antony Theodore 13 January 2016

Yes mystic beauty is always filled with eternity. valley of calmness and the great silence. are you a mystic poet? very fine thoughts you have given us here in this poem. thank you dear poet. tony

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C. P. Sharma 12 November 2008

Fasika, your silence is more powerful than an epic. I am reminded of Wordswort: '...breaking the silence of the seas Among the farthest Hebrides'

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Dereje Amera 21 October 2008

'Mystic beauty' is beautiful and deep expression of silence intoned by your great pen. Well penned poem. CONGRATULATIONS

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Alfredo Jacques 07 June 2007

I love the feeling of this poem, you have a wonderful way of writing thank you again for sharing.

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Mary Naylor 01 July 2006

This poem is filled with peace and beauty and hauntingly lovely imagery. I think you are very talented. It is not easy to bring an abstract idea to life. Your metaphor comes to life in the imagination.

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Fasika Ayalew

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