Mystic beauty
endless pleasure
filled with eternity
cascade like a fall
...
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Fasika, your silence is more powerful than an epic. I am reminded of Wordswort: '...breaking the silence of the seas Among the farthest Hebrides'
'Mystic beauty' is beautiful and deep expression of silence intoned by your great pen. Well penned poem. CONGRATULATIONS
I love the feeling of this poem, you have a wonderful way of writing thank you again for sharing.
This poem is filled with peace and beauty and hauntingly lovely imagery. I think you are very talented. It is not easy to bring an abstract idea to life. Your metaphor comes to life in the imagination.
Yes mystic beauty is always filled with eternity. valley of calmness and the great silence. are you a mystic poet? very fine thoughts you have given us here in this poem. thank you dear poet. tony