With great anguish the day began
death severed love's embrace
a life of promises and plans
with one last breath time erased
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Thank you. A poet feels not only his/her pain but commiserates with others.
A very poignant write. It vividly portrayed the heart ache of a broken heart. So beautifully written, Chris.
Thank you Rose. Sometimes we need to feel another's sadness to get past our own.
I really love the message in this poem and how deep and emotional it is. Don't give up!
Brilliant my dear friend, poet and brother in Christ.
Thank you Qiniso. In some people you can see the sadness they try to hide.