Friday, January 18, 2019

Silence Of A Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

With great anguish the day began
death severed love's embrace
a life of promises and plans
with one last breath time erased
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Chris Embrick
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Qiniso Mogale 06 March 2019

Brilliant my dear friend, poet and brother in Christ.

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Chris Embrick 08 March 2019

Thank you Qiniso. In some people you can see the sadness they try to hide.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 January 2019

Very feelingly writ. The pathos is palpable.

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Chris Embrick 08 March 2019

Thank you. A poet feels not only his/her pain but commiserates with others.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 January 2019

A very poignant write. It vividly portrayed the heart ache of a broken heart. So beautifully written, Chris.

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Chris Embrick 08 March 2019

Thank you Rose. Sometimes we need to feel another's sadness to get past our own.

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Aaron Stokes 18 January 2019

I really love the message in this poem and how deep and emotional it is. Don't give up!

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Chris Embrick 18 January 2019

Thank you. In life and love you learn to cope.

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