Saturday, November 24, 2018

Silence Isn't Always Golden Comments

Rating: 4.8

That hurt, a pain never felt before
I think my heart is broken
Knowing I no longer have your love
The silence spoke like thunder
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Jennifer Birchall
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Chinedu Dike 14 July 2021

Deep feelings expressed with a wonderful command of language. A poignant bit of verse, very heartfelt with strong emotions...

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Amir Marandi 21 June 2020

Strong emotions are expressed in your poem. I sent you a message.

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Khairul Ahsan 27 February 2020

'The silence spoke like thunder' - an excellent expression. Loved your poignant poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 June 2019

My tears are a waterfall flowing free/I'll wipe them with a heavy hand....great expression emitting efficacious vibes! You have chosen a befitting title for this work on heartbreak! Well penned.....10

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Jane Campion 15 June 2019

This feels so real. It is what I do paint on a smile.

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 June 2019

Knowing I no longer have your love The silence spoke like thunder I knew it would happen so why am I sad My tears are a waterfall flowing free......hurt and heartbreak. this is going to be in us till death. wonderfully presented. tony

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Kim Barney 22 March 2019

It was the title that attracted me to this poem, and I was not disappointed. Well done, Jennifer!

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Savita Tyagi 15 January 2019

So true. So much is often hidden behind the veil of silence. thank you for sharing the lovely poem.

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Abhipsa Panda 03 December 2018

Real emotions have revealed through your poem...touched by your lines..thanks for sharing...

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Jennifer Birchall 06 December 2018

You are very welcome Abhipsa.

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 November 2018

I think my heart is broken Knowing I no longer have your love The silence spoke like thunder.. experiences of life. love is always a mystery.......... you are a blessed person when you find a real and humble person to love who does not play with ego. tony

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Jennifer Birchall 29 November 2018

Thank you Tony for you kind words.

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Gryny 24 November 2018

Sigh... Ive felt this Way too many times Thanks for the write.

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Jennifer Birchall 29 November 2018

It's not a good way to feel is it. Time is a healer.

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Matthew Holloway 24 November 2018

I am sorry you have felt such sorrow and pain, a very well written poem

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Jennifer Birchall 29 November 2018

Thank you Matthew.

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Thomas Kane 24 November 2018

So true how the silence can tear through us for years. Your poem made me feel strong emotion and to me that makes a great poem thank you.

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Jennifer Birchall 29 November 2018

Thank you so much for your kind words Tommy.

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