That hurt, a pain never felt before
I think my heart is broken
Knowing I no longer have your love
The silence spoke like thunder
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Strong emotions are expressed in your poem. I sent you a message.
'The silence spoke like thunder' - an excellent expression. Loved your poignant poem.
My tears are a waterfall flowing free/I'll wipe them with a heavy hand....great expression emitting efficacious vibes! You have chosen a befitting title for this work on heartbreak! Well penned.....10
Knowing I no longer have your love The silence spoke like thunder I knew it would happen so why am I sad My tears are a waterfall flowing free......hurt and heartbreak. this is going to be in us till death. wonderfully presented. tony
It was the title that attracted me to this poem, and I was not disappointed. Well done, Jennifer!
So true. So much is often hidden behind the veil of silence. thank you for sharing the lovely poem.
Real emotions have revealed through your poem...touched by your lines..thanks for sharing...
I think my heart is broken Knowing I no longer have your love The silence spoke like thunder.. experiences of life. love is always a mystery.......... you are a blessed person when you find a real and humble person to love who does not play with ego. tony
I am sorry you have felt such sorrow and pain, a very well written poem
So true how the silence can tear through us for years. Your poem made me feel strong emotion and to me that makes a great poem thank you.
Deep feelings expressed with a wonderful command of language. A poignant bit of verse, very heartfelt with strong emotions...