Silence Is The Entrance.... Comments
Below the water surface
I put down my foundations
to build a house
with a tiny room
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This is a very beautifully composed poem that draws you in from start to finish. It is thought prob
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FORGOTTEN TO NOTICE: The coloured Design is by Sylvia Frances Chan. Thank you.
Silence is the Entrance to the deepest me....So beautiful poem! Without uttering a single word, love can be felt.I congratulate you for this poem being selected as the Poem of the Day on4th Dec.2017.
Thank you so much dear Bharati, I was indeed looking for the poems with the mark of POD, thank you for this.
Amen, as deep called to deep so doth the spirit of man to man
Well done with a great metaphor below the surface there are currents and sounds but the peace is wonderful. A well grounded person is peaceful inside.
I am flattered by your wonderful response, dear Soren. Thank YOU
Short or long, I feel so touched that much while pointing my fingers/hands to heavens, truly most loveliest words as comments and feedbacks here.
WOW! What a most beautiful time these past hours, years and times, I am mesmerized by all commnets and responses
Below the water surface I have just lost my way suddenly there is a door open the main gate of my soul. Beautiful lines with a stunning imagery. Brilliant.
You wrote Stunning Imagery, since YOU are a painter too, Prem Sir!
I lost my way below the water surface... great expression. Silence is the entrance... undeniable truth!
Nice to be there nice to be in place to Heaven in order to remain in the interior, in this huge silence.......precious expression!
A poem that mirrors a beautiful souls heartfelt emotions. I can relaye to this beautiful poem. Congratulations
Silence has deeper beauty that we need to feel at each moment. It is true entrance. Revisiting this poem gives me immense pleasure.
Below the water surface I see my inside peculiar, the doors are mirror I see myself knocking on the door.....an emotional expression is well executed. Full stars..
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I like how this piece of work is self reflective Sylvia.take you flawers