Silence In The Cemetery. Comments

Ann, I used to find graveyards fascinating when I was younger, in fact I still do. You brought back the memories of the silence, the stirring, the waiting, with this wonderful poem. I love it. Irene

As the other writers have said, I too feel the silence of death in this poem. The melancholy is so well crafted and resonates in my heart. 10 Karin Anderson

There is a bleakness about your delivery which intensifies the angst that underpins the piece. Some lines are particularly distinctive - 'Beingness without a trace', and 'sudden shock of stolen breath'. Methinks there is a personal dimension to this fine elegy. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

I can feel and hear the silence in the cemetery by reading this poem. Very well written. Regards Naseer

so much depth in this poem i felt the silence too good write

Very nice idea, beautiful composition.