In the depth of a dark and intimidating valley
In your silence dream
With mouths remained open
Against the silence
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well, well... I read your poem. Is she a cannibal angel? hehe! I like the oxymoron (Screaming Silently) . It's nice.The Valley which is a part of nature ay look beautiful and merciful for a Romantic poey. For you it's more like Naturalistic view. Nice. I was more Romantic in the previous years. But I now know that nature is really indifferent to me as a part of herself...
Such an eerie description of a dream. We have all had dreams some good and others not so good. Whatever it was I am so glad you woke up! Very interesting write.
ur poem reminds me of some of my nightmares in which i wanna shout but the more i try the more i fail....i guess u wrote this piece after a bad nightmare or u imagined it....any way..........it was kindda unique! ! i enjoyed...thanx!