Saturday, June 29, 2013

Silence Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the depth of a dark and intimidating valley
In your silence dream
With mouths remained open
Against the silence
...
Read full text

nader baheri
COMMENTS
Alookh (matin) 09 September 2013

ur poem reminds me of some of my nightmares in which i wanna shout but the more i try the more i fail....i guess u wrote this piece after a bad nightmare or u imagined it....any way..........it was kindda unique! ! i enjoyed...thanx!

0 0 Reply
Sina Farajzadeh 08 August 2013

well, well... I read your poem. Is she a cannibal angel? hehe! I like the oxymoron (Screaming Silently) . It's nice.The Valley which is a part of nature ay look beautiful and merciful for a Romantic poey. For you it's more like Naturalistic view. Nice. I was more Romantic in the previous years. But I now know that nature is really indifferent to me as a part of herself...

0 0 Reply
Heather Wilkins 20 July 2013

this sounds more like a night mare. good imagery

0 0 Reply
Patricia Grantham 10 July 2013

Such an eerie description of a dream. We have all had dreams some good and others not so good. Whatever it was I am so glad you woke up! Very interesting write.

0 0 Reply
Vipins Puthooran 09 July 2013

an eerie silence/ a good poem! ! !

0 1 Reply
Unwritten Soul 04 July 2013

Is this a ghost movie or what? LOL_Soul

0 0 Reply
Gajanan Mishra 29 June 2013

silence dream, good write, thanks. I am grateful to you,

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success