rave of ripples holding delight
very wishes of thrill hues hedonic
sky smears blue by beams of moon
night as redolent of betiding glow
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stars yet winks into void by darkness bliss never loses strength of heaven liked these expressions in your poem: winking stars, bliss.. heaven .. etc. thank you fo rsharing
I sense something in your poems And almost all the titles are nice um.....but I'm incapable of understanding your poems, and I am unable to put a finger on what little I can sense, and confused whether I can sense it at all
Poets are usually fond of silence but when it is of night, silence is mystified... U hv rightly chosen the words for ur poem.Liked it.
wornderful as always, you must write in the silence by the night and continue to amuse ur readers..10++++++
dream may not forsake desire by snow heart never fails by roaring clouds moment yet unmiffed by shadow of light as gleams of silence heaves the night..nothing can deter us from achieving anything....lovely poems to come across....10 read mine..at bay....i miss.... fine without you
THROUGH YOUR POETIC IMAGERY, YOU TRANSPORT US TO A LAND OF DREAMS! 10! -Raj
From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.
really nice...really meaningful.. touching.... as dreams continue to illuminate in spite of darkeness happiness crawls to beat sadness as hopes emerged despite discouragement .your piece expressed within its silence... making it more understandable...(smile) you have successfully expressed the feeling....with a great impact... like dawn and dusk....fighting to win...fighting to rule... this is really nice....as always... but this touches me a lot...one of my favorites from your many great poems... 10+++++ Lovelots, Maia
dreams that heave in the silence of the night wowwwwwwww nice metaphors very good write as always 10+++++++++ anjali
excellent.....hmmm keep writing in silence by the night. silent whisper brings wordless and endless emotional moment, as its silence by the night alway and forever............. path are same but mission are different walking in silence by the night. is lonely persons wish in silence by the night..........
Beautiful poem my friend. So much good at it emotions. The conclusion is full with optymism. I read with a great pleasure. (10 v.) Greetings :) MariaBarbaraKorynt
Very Nice Subhendu, I have emailed you regarding. The true gift is in the thought that one can project to others, to make them feel, breath.....take them there, that moment in time, then and only then, the gift is yours! !
I would need to study this to understand exactly what your describing, I am very interested in it's meaning.
Flowing with eloqence..... this piece makes for feelngs of joy - - thank you... Fay
where is reeks lost to cry of dream excellent metaphorical poem 10++++++++++
Beautiful penned. +10 Thanks for sharing.