Silence At Daybreak Comments

The tender warmth of growth radiates, its grin spreading life across. Caught in the caresses of finesse, it blooms full and rosy, standing up to mighty height of beauty: -D

This poem created with the lines of gold, shining and, meaningful....U plant it well to green in poem hunter forest with words shady the readers' smile_Unwritten Soul

i'm commentless. Lol. The words, the flow, resonances and style- it's just splendid

your poem deserves to gain silent appreciations

This is a beautiful poem with a great message. I love your vocabulary and the way your words flow together

The interest is very much high standard, I appreciate the practical reflections of this write, it is one that takes the mind and soul to reality, and integrates the sophisticated joy of life and social contents, at some point it sounded as if you raise a concern, and regarless, this write still has that spark that shines on every bit of every vers, Great, ... Very amazing! The_African_Son (Th³_ªfR¹cª¬_šºN)

This is a beautiful poem explained in all its detail of wonder, its a beautiful write and I take my hat off to you in appreciation of how your penmenship is so well put, thank you so much for sharing.10+++

beautiful..............

This poem soars in heights unimagined with lots of imagery complementing each line.

Just lovely swetha! ! Thankyou. Regards...Sharon.

A wonderful poem.Nice job Swetha!

I really like the intro, it has a kick to start...welcoming readers to continue...like the whole write too, just keep on good work! ! i am sure more to come soon_Unwritten Soul

It is not very often that I see such strong and profound verses flowing so smoothly into another one without losing its powerful yet subtle message. The metaphorical and yet the actual journey of the seed's grim realization of the harsh truth of today's reality is not something that the reader cannot partake in. Thank you for such a wonderful poem.

Great piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us. Keep on writing and, let us learn from you as well. E.K.L.

very interesting read - lovely

I was just thinking about you and about to read some of your incredible work :) Thank you! I am speechless to even express how this poem makes me feel, it is beautiful and you have taken me with you on this journey along your heart.

Fascinating poem giving food for thought.

A very interesting poem with lovely feeling for the greenery around us. Very unusual use of language which is good to find.. And I love the phrase 'silent kingdom'.

This is interesting, the environmental message and the use of repetition, reinforcing and developing the theme to the strength of the last 2 lines which were powerful.

wow i really love the alternation spirit of each words along the lines, the wonderful tactical structure of poetry that bares nothing but some true and profound reflection of the real society in our daily lives, great my friend The_African_Son