Wednesday, January 4, 2006

Silence And The Cold Comments

Rating: 4.8

I watch your back
and icicles sparkled
through my field of vision
the world comprised
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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Sandra Fowler 04 January 2006

This is fine imagery, but I am sorry for the pain that caused you to create this poem and hope that the winter mood will end for you soon. Regards, Sandra Fowler

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