I enter my empty room,
the air infecting my lungs with thrusting void,
Silence consuming thoughts and mind,
Darkness before, and darkness shall reside,
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Broken dreams and illusions are part of our experience which makes us stronger if we take it in a right way. We can be empty and destruct or we can rise up to another level and stay peaceful. Thanks for thought-provoking read and strong imagery. Best wishes. A.
This what you call 'self made doom' might for others be just a holy peace, free from psychopats who play games with other peoples' lives... The dreams had been broken a very long time ago - there's nothing left that you can still try to break...
excellent metaphorical poem, well penned with deep thoughts...............10+++