Tuesday, February 21, 2023

Silence Comments

Rating: 4.0

This night I didn't sleep for long
Even after trying to stay strong
One minute here and another one there
I don't know what I was trying to share
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Naom Kerubo
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Good poem. Nice rhyme scheme. Enjoyed

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Smoky Hoss 30 March 2023

I truly like the word play in the final stanza; very good!

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