Silence Poem by Aqua Flower

Silence

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my mind can't form the words
that need to be heard
the end feels so close
and the silence is deafening
my eyes only see four walls and a clock
I am forgotten fruit that rots
the unknown consumes me
what will be the end to this tragedy

Copyright @ Aqua Flower
12/2019

Saturday, December 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: death,fearful,tragedy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 06 February 2022

The unknown consumes me.... very sad

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Carl Roussell 30 December 2019

Much hurt and loneliness in your poem.

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Kostas Lagos 28 December 2019

A stupefying poem Flower! Congratulations

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 December 2019

Such a heartfelt write. Such thought comes when one feels low. It will be over. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 December 2019

Yes, I'm on the verge of eternal now hence called a long-drawn silence.

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