Friday, October 9, 2015

Silence Comments

Rating: 4.5

The silence has become deafening.
The stillness is frightening.
The quietness pulsates in my brain.
I struggle to find ease from the pain.
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Chinedu Dike 17 October 2015

A good depiction of the emotional and psychologically trauma occasioned by tragedy in bliss of love in an abusive relationship. A well articulated piece of poetry, insightfully penned in poetic diction with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Win. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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