Tuesday, August 27, 2013

Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

The river is no more,
No flood, no splash, no roar;
A solitary portion, a king missing his throne
Kowtows to bemoan the hard fate that left him forlorn.
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Odhiambo Gilbert Francis
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Dedan Onyango 25 June 2015

A great piece there, the length of the lines creates the atmosphere of our slowly depreciating life. Love yourself first before for others you grow a thirst

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Henry Nyandiko 03 October 2013

A wonderful and interesting piece

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George Juma 24 September 2013

Rich in phonological and structural devices.

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Judith Awiti 19 September 2013

Awesome piece...Be good at loving...love yourself first.... I love it

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Ramesh Rai 18 September 2013

beautiful write. you are right indeed, first love yourself. loved your write.

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