Friday, August 17, 2012

Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Silence breaks through the night
When the world is half asleep
My memories shut me in so tight
Fighting the pain of the night
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Meena Mustafa
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Saadat Tahir 13 September 2012

its a sad piece of realistic poetry...the night slowly slips bye as dreams congeal and disperse as flotsam on the tide of time... lovely write cheers :)

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well written silence in night positive and negative the duality. thank u read mine ove poems.

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Kelly Seale 17 August 2012

The is no worse sound in the world, as the silent scream. Your loneliness, despair, and sadness can become a beacon of light is you allow yourself to see the future of Hope, the power of Faith, and the essence of Love. -Great Ink Meena, You express yourself so passionately... just read between the line... -Kelly.

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