Silence Comments

2) you have a marvellous command over words " A language unworldly"… the language of silence.. loved it

Profound. " I felt it again on my bed at night Darkness" reminded me of two lines by Poet-critique of renown, A R Rajaraja Varma: "Puralunnennu thonnundu irulinnamgakangalil"… meaning I feel as if the darkness is getting smeared on my body(skin) ..

Darkness; through which I saw the light Silence - to feel; and to feel so weak, Silence, I think I heard her speak. The Me within, in silence too. personification of silence. this is beautiful. such personification can come only from a poetic heart. thank you dear poetess. dev

Very nice poem. Enjoyed reading it but got confused in the 5th Stanza (last line) - Vain and slain, together abridged. You are referring to Silence and what? There is much power in silence.

the silence dancing in rhyme and rhythm is beautiful with unique and powerful expressions...

This poem, it enters from the periphery. You use words and syntax in a unique way. This poem is a nice meditation on Silence. Thank you.

good writing, I like it, thanks.

The rhythm of this imagery poem is felt in every stanza. Good use of rhymes and euphemisms. Thank you for sharing ~Besa

you are a gifted writer...and the poem is beautiful with rhyme and rhythm and feeling......

Words gifted with stature... The crowd through which I made my way, Gave me a second to poise it through Shouts around, though I felt them nay, The Me within, in silence too.

wonderful poem! bravo! it contains lots of inspiring words and wisdom

great very inspiring

Simply beautiful my words cant express the power of these words. One of the best poems i have read yet.

When we light up the lamp of soul, When we need a shadow of solace, When we hear the whisper of soulSilence poured to our heart's sky))))))) Silence is palpableSilence is pleasurableSilence is like the glide of a feather in a gentle breezeSilence is like the melting of snow in a valleySilence is like the smoulder of embers into ash((((It's a great poem, I like it like a melodious song))))) Top marks! ! ! ! ! !

The price of silence is reflected well by the nice poem. Keeping silence she stands tall. a good piece of work to keep it in memory. Cheers!