Saturday, November 28, 2009

*silence Comments

Rating: 3.2

Silence stills the early hours,
silent is the voice.
Quiet stills the storm within,
quiet formed by choice.
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Laurie hill
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Patricia Joan Jones 04 January 2012

Breathtaking and beautifully penned. Love it.

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Stephen Stirk 09 December 2009

A truly brilliant and inventive piece that gives a whole new perspective to silence. It is more than golden. Your words add many glittering facets. Wonderful piece. I also agree with Katherine regarding the excellent rythmn and rhyme throughout. First rate Regards Steve

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T S 08 December 2009

Laurie you are turning into a Master of words, Astounding, beautiful, write. xxx

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Sonya Florentino 30 November 2009

silence is sacred and this poem sings like a hymn....

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george george 30 November 2009

Your rhythm is exquisite, your rhymes excellent. Nice treatise on silence! Very good!

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A sensitive and poignant poem Laurie and as always written so eloquently. I love the Angels and how they can bring solace by answering questions. I feel honored to be only the second reader who has commented. 10 love Karin

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