Friday, August 28, 2009

Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

How people stand the silence
i will never know
cause to me the silence scares me
for i know im not alone
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Courtney Loren
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Gold Fish 09 October 2009

Extremely well-written. I can relate to what you saying in this poem. When I was little, my parents would punish me by making me go to my room and close the door. In other words, I had a distaste for isolation. In fact, I was indifferent to any other punishment. Anyway, keep up the good work. You are already quite polished.

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Irene Clark-hogg 05 October 2009

I like this poem, it is good; but with a little extra thought it has the potential to be excellent. Irene

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Shekhar Joshi 23 September 2009

interesting thing is there can't be complete silence ever.......good poem....liked it......

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Omar Ibrahim 04 September 2009

u know i'm almost silent and maybe this is the reason people don't like me....i liked your poem it's very nice..10

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DELETED NOW 02 September 2009

...good...there was passion. and silence is not what u should be afraid of...u can always make noise with something. and what are they not telling lies about?

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Moriah Reyes 01 September 2009

very interesting and well written! :) i liked it!

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Bryan Alexander 28 August 2009

wow i cant believe your 15 very well written

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