Saturday, June 30, 2012

Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

O listen to the silence
So gentle everywhere
Hear it, quiet, whispering
Yet softly through the air
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Valerie Dohren
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Smoky Hoss 13 August 2013

I had to return and read this again, and say it truly is as wonderful now as when I first came upon it.

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Nader Baheri 06 November 2012

NICELY PENNED.i have a lyric with the same title.i would be so glad to know u r opinion about it.

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Robert Gallagher 04 November 2012

Beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing this.

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Dave James 31 October 2012

A priceless insight to something so elusive, wonderful, simply wonderful.

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Paula Dagnel 24 July 2012

Wow! Again...this has such a wonderful, almost antiqated feel to it. The phrasing and flow are simply beautiful! Each line pulls the reader deeper into the next. This is just so gentle and peaceful. Really beautiful!

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Ruth Walters 16 July 2012

Silence usually terrifies me, I have to have some sound all the time, unless I'm sleeping but when you put it like this it does make me feel quite peaceful.......

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Neela Nath Das 14 July 2012

Wonderful. Silence has its own language.Loved the line most-Silence bathes the soul in peace.

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Elna Nel 13 July 2012

as I am a big fan of silence, thanks for these words

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Ramdas Bhandarkar 09 July 2012

Silence bathes the soul in peace As calm serenity Speaking to the heart through love To soothe and comfort thee Beautiful write, Solid one, Sharing on Facebook! Thank you!

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Smoky Hoss 07 July 2012

This one definately goes into my favorites list; so good!

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 07 July 2012

Silence reigns in solitude And though not ever heard Within the mind it lingers - You`ll know each fleeting word its a twisted with new flavours wonderful

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Godfrey Morris 05 July 2012

Beautifuly written Valerie

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Mandi June 04 July 2012

An absolutely delightful poem, Valerie. Extremely serene and relaxing.

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The Reader 04 July 2012

The central paradox of personified speaking silence like keats' unheard melodies is great...Russell diagnoses the reasons of many of our social & personal maladies & says we have got issues because we have lost silence & solitude.

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Meena Mustafa 03 July 2012

Terrific write.. all I can say is Wow!

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Juan Olivarez 03 July 2012

Silence is golden I have heard. Well I have five grandkids and I wish I knew what silence sounds like. Lol, the way you describe it it sounds like heaven.

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Marcus Mckinley 03 July 2012

flowing like a silent whisper are the words within your poem. well done

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Karen Sinclair 02 July 2012

Such a harmonious soothing piece, stroked my soul... wonderful. the more time i spend on this earth the more i relish silence.. thank you Valerie for sharing....

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Hans Vr 02 July 2012

Wonderful ode to silence. So nice and relaxing I love it. I have also a poem, titled silence. If you have time, please read and comment on that one as well.

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Joseph Anderson 01 July 2012

So soft, serene and gently phrased. The sounds of silence, a beautiful concept

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