Silence Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

Silence

Rating: 4.6


my silence is a speech

in my eyes you could read,

you could dive, you could teach.

trying hard being near

but your shores with no reach.

searching you in my all,

your dwelling in my each,



with a misery spattered the soul

my sorrow waiting you,

with the care, me to bleach...

and the labor was the longest

lonely faced with a will

and the love born breech

drowning there in the pain

watched by you from your beach.

little cruel, how to be

waiting you, me to teach

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eden Numb 10 January 2010

i like it.. silence means a lot. yes silence means a lot.hehe...

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Briana Doni 06 January 2010

This poem goes really deep and can relate to almost anybody in a variety of ways. i absolutely love this part from this poem.... 'my silence is a speech in my eyes you could read'

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Sahar Sahar 06 December 2009

A warm hope to land on the shore of love.....beautifull romantic poem......thanks for sharing

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Siddharth Singh 24 November 2009

Your silence echoes in the deft touches of your words, mam. Amazing!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 October 2009

PS Goofed! No voting option. But from bosom ten niv

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Kevin Carney 26 December 2010

The flow of your words and the silence of our souls just so wondefully put together. I really liked it.10+++

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Divij C 31 May 2010

really liked it, , , awesome it was just flowing in a rhythm.....

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Vaughn Bekker 20 May 2010

the silence of our souls, the voice of our hearts, beautiful poem...: 0)

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Surya . 25 March 2010

silence is golden.encouraging poem.thanx for sharing surya

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Adeline Foster 26 February 2010

This is poetry...(? !)

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