Tuesday, July 14, 2009

Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw you last night
But you never said anything
We had a special way of greeting
That’s how I have known us, known you
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Lizelle 'Leasel' Martins
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 05 March 2010

Naked honesty and soul-baring, yet the emotions you conveyed relate to the reader and expose our own frail humanity. Excellent! 10++++

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Bob Blackwell 07 January 2010

Leasal, you express your feelings very well in this well written poem. Well Done!

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Afzal Shauq 05 August 2009

What is happening to me...to us Am I holding on to something that’s long gone Have I become that blind to what I want it to be a sweet and meaningful poem..yes sometimes the silence has its own unspoken language... a sweet way communication..heart to heart to connections.. like this poem and appreciate your way of writing..10/10

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Timothy Hector 14 July 2009

well written. we have all questioned our position every now and then. check out come of my stuff i think you might like it

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Lizelle 'Leasel' Martins

Lizelle 'Leasel' Martins

Johannesburg, South Africa
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