Thursday, November 4, 2004

Silence Comments

Rating: 4.5

Another place, another time
When the world was not possessed by man
And beast played but a minor part;
Evolution had not yet begun.
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Janet Mary Zylstra
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Roseann Shawiak 02 February 2016

Very enticing imagery depicting the beauty of silence in the beginning before man came and ruined everything. Really great poem, feelings of serenity flow beneath the rhythm of your poem, calming my spirit.10+++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Janet Mary Zylstra 29 November 2004

Thanks, Amy. I had my doubts about it, but you've restored my faith in Silence.

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Amy Murtagh 27 November 2004

This poem is absolutely amazing! You really get across the atmosphere of peace and tranquility with magic, definately your best

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Janet Mary Zylstra

Janet Mary Zylstra

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