Tuesday, July 22, 2008

Silence Comments

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I find you awake next to me,
you murmur the words, 'I'm sorry, '
as a tear runs down your cheek.
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Javier Falcon
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May Namoc 24 July 2008

aww, saaaaaad! ! ! ! i love the details. it's good. u can totally see everything while you're reading it. good right, love! <3333333333

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*here's a secret* silence scares me, im deathly afraid of it.. This poem gave me the chills, how its so in detail...oh gosh, i love it... <3333 ...millie...

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Al Ramos 22 July 2008

Even though silence is golden, sometimes we are playing with fool's gold. Nice poem

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Javier Falcon

Javier Falcon

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