Monday, June 16, 2008
Silence Comments
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Your heavy eyelids are downcast
I can see the rim of your brow
And the outline of your jawbone
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David Desantis
17 June 2008
whoa...looks like you did alot of eye studying here...haha great stuff, very descriptive...maybe you should re-name it something to do with the eye/soul....first time i fell in love it was the eyes that got me...funny how they tell everything.
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8/2/2025 2:50:50 PM # 1.0.0
this is great, but i agree it could have a name to do with the eye/soul that has a bit more to do with the poem. But it is really great anyway!