(This was rather my first poem)
You kept a long silence
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Yes, at times this silence becomes more eloquent than words! I had read somewhere - the mighty Himalayas stood thundering in its silence! -Raj Nandy
You say a lot with a few words with this one. What is noticeable here are all the words with s sounds.
You have an excellent ability to evoke a myriad of feeling in a short verse.I wonder if you, (like me) , have English as a second language. Ngaio Beck
in silence lava flows in silence cosmos runs in silence we live we die in cresendo! ! ! ! ! !
Very concise and well said - silence is a powerful thing Ruthy