Wednesday, April 23, 2008

Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

(This was rather my first poem)


You kept a long silence
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Sathya Narayana
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Ruth Walters 23 August 2009

Very concise and well said - silence is a powerful thing Ruthy

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Raj Nandy 13 February 2009

Yes, at times this silence becomes more eloquent than words! I had read somewhere - the mighty Himalayas stood thundering in its silence! -Raj Nandy

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Ben Gieske 17 November 2008

You say a lot with a few words with this one. What is noticeable here are all the words with s sounds.

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ngaio beck 01 May 2008

You have an excellent ability to evoke a myriad of feeling in a short verse.I wonder if you, (like me) , have English as a second language. Ngaio Beck

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Trinity K 26 April 2008

in silence lava flows in silence cosmos runs in silence we live we die in cresendo! ! ! ! ! !

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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