Friday, March 14, 2008

Silence Comments

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Silence, I welcome it like a gift,
Treasure my solitude,
Hope for no disturbance,
Love what you hear,
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Mohammad Al-kurdi 22 March 2008

so real so good....it discribe the silence well, but what's the blade

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Ben Gieske 14 March 2008

Says a lot within a few words. The last line is so final. This line, 'Love what you hear', makes one stop and think. It contrasts silence, but even when everything is quiet, one can hear things. So the question is, 'What does it refer to? ' A good poem because it lets the reader wonder and, in this case, hope that there will be a door opening and a new sound.

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