Thursday, January 13, 2005

Silence Comments

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Silence
Peaceful, Tranquil
Sleeping, Dreaming, Thinking
Night, Dark, Fear, Distress
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Kim McInnis
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Sejal Pachisia 06 September 2006

i actually thought this was brilliant.. i luv the contrast as well as the structure.. i think it says a lot.

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Matthew Hyatt 26 March 2005

Your poem carries a very flat note here. Your poem doesn't seem to be one of your best. Sorry.

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Kim McInnis

Kim McInnis

LaSalle Ontario
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