Thursday, June 14, 2007

Silence Comments

Rating: 3.5

I know your silence,
I know your dismay,
You steal away glances,
Though bitter, I know your say.
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drishti magoo
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Saurabh Nagpal 06 October 2009

Im sure Drishti, that u actually know and understand the Silence~! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Perfect~! ! ! ! ! :))

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Saurabh Nagpal 06 October 2009

Im sure Drishti, that u actually know and understand the Silence~! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Perfect~! ! ! ! ! :))

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M V Ramana Moorthy 29 April 2008

A finely structured poem. Drishti has created a wonderful mood through subtle choice of language.The first stanza is very impressive with remarkable brevity and a word choice that generates an 'exquisite ambiguity'- neither an overstated emotional tone nor a flat, subdued tone.The last stanza is too wordy and can be revised to fit the tenor of the opening stanza.Well done Drishti! .

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