Silence Comments

Im sure Drishti, that u actually know and understand the Silence~! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Perfect~! ! ! ! ! :))

Im sure Drishti, that u actually know and understand the Silence~! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Perfect~! ! ! ! ! :))

A finely structured poem. Drishti has created a wonderful mood through subtle choice of language.The first stanza is very impressive with remarkable brevity and a word choice that generates an 'exquisite ambiguity'- neither an overstated emotional tone nor a flat, subdued tone.The last stanza is too wordy and can be revised to fit the tenor of the opening stanza.Well done Drishti! .