Tuesday, May 8, 2007

Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your efforts to be oblivious of me
To dress a minor wound,
To maintain with sweaty fingers,
your disillusioned pride.
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Viviana Torres
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Ryan M 14 June 2007

after reading your poem, i was in awe, that was very deep, yur words created an image in which i could see, as well as relate do. great poem

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Cellar Door 08 May 2007

That was a great poem. I can relate to it in more ways than I'd like to admit.

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Derrick Clark 08 May 2007

this was a good poem, keep it up.

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