Friday, December 20, 2013

Signs Of The Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hitherto a sleepy way-lost village,
Shall now enter history's fresh new sheet,
Vain may turn lessons of its farm college,
That would wonder how men should the greens treat.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 August 2019

A fabulous poem sir! Well structured and brilliantly penned! My favorite lines: Poor greens to greed shall now the tithe pay/Life alive to dead graveyard shall yield ground/Grey iron and concrete shall the earth pound/Pylons, pillars stand where trees smile today! A very creditable piece of work..............10

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 August 2019

I am really grateful Dear poet Swain, you read this old and rather longish poem so patiently. It is my observation, and confirmed by many, that long poems are avoided by readers. I wonder what can be done.

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