He wrote to me a love letter
He hugged me to feel better
He caught my hand when I was lost
He showed me how much I cost
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wonderful poem, i like the way you have presented your feelings, thanks for sharing.
Nice one.. good desire..10 My sky So it is you my Assman* (sky) I shall try And remain with you Till the journey is passed through
Your words of love are coming from your core of your heart. Thank you for this a great poem.
Wonderful expressions of love you have pictured it very well in this very good poem. thank you very much. tony
These are natural signs of love. Thanks for the note. I hope your message will be received by the person to whom that is addressed. Hoping one day I'll feel the same..! - That seems to be an anti climax!
I really like it asmaa great job keep writing poems like that one
I really like it asmaa great job keep writing poems like that one
good job asma. it's a well written piece of poem with great combinations. keep it up! !
*Hoping one day I'll feel the same..! * a lovely love poem, well written. But love is not shared with equity: one (his love, here) is 100%; the other (her love) a bit less.. A sure truth in Life :)
Smiling when he hears my name Hoping one day I'll feel the same..! A beautiful poem about combination of love and beauty on equal footing.Well done Keep sharing.10/10 Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
What a love! so good......